I think you should go find some funny webcomics and animations and study what makes them funny. This... just wasn't funny, not entertaining. I don't even care about the fact that the animation isn't that great either, although that's one of the reasons I stopped watching halfway through.
well u can't please everyone.. but u should watch the entire thing before leaving a review and rating it 0.. the final talent show scene was the funniest part.. thanks anyway tho for atleast taking the time to watch it :)
Your FBF skills are very impressive. It flowed well and it was very smooth. The only critique I can give is that when you do close-ups, you might want to tone down the line thickness. Other than that, amazing job, amazing story, amazing everything.
P.S. Sorry for the 9/10, I can't biased ;)
P.S.S. I did give you a 5/5 though.
With the closeups i got kinda lazy and rather than FBFing some of them (like i should've) i decided to tween in for it instead. After all, getting that kinda sequence right is a pain, and after 2 or 3 tries i accepted that i wasn't ready to do that yet, so i opted for a close-up the old fashioned way. Either way, i like how it turned out, and when i'm just looking at it without trying to pick things out it almost doesn't look like i made it, which to me it means that it turned out good. ^^
It's very ambient, and very calming, I love it. Also, BoxingTheStars, his hair isn't lighting up. Look closer. It's his headphones.
You guys used my level! I made Killer Mountain :D. This was very fun, I love challenges, no critique, this is perfect.
Try it out ;]
The bagels and orange juice are a lie.
Hehe, portal reference, that was pretty fun, I got a 66 :] Is that good?
Good job ruining that comic for me.
Jeez, this blows both my remixes away. I would try again, but for some reason, my FL Studio has become corrupted. Half my sounds don't work! Good job, anyways :]
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