Sorry man...
I think you should go find some funny webcomics and animations and study what makes them funny. This... just wasn't funny, not entertaining. I don't even care about the fact that the animation isn't that great either, although that's one of the reasons I stopped watching halfway through.
well u can't please everyone.. but u should watch the entire thing before leaving a review and rating it 0.. the final talent show scene was the funniest part.. thanks anyway tho for atleast taking the time to watch it :)
Wow
Your FBF skills are very impressive. It flowed well and it was very smooth. The only critique I can give is that when you do close-ups, you might want to tone down the line thickness. Other than that, amazing job, amazing story, amazing everything.
P.S. Sorry for the 9/10, I can't biased ;)
P.S.S. I did give you a 5/5 though.
With the closeups i got kinda lazy and rather than FBFing some of them (like i should've) i decided to tween in for it instead. After all, getting that kinda sequence right is a pain, and after 2 or 3 tries i accepted that i wasn't ready to do that yet, so i opted for a close-up the old fashioned way. Either way, i like how it turned out, and when i'm just looking at it without trying to pick things out it almost doesn't look like i made it, which to me it means that it turned out good. ^^
It makes me happy to say this...
But sometimes these things need to be said. I have to say that was rather shocking, can you honestly say that you deserved that high a score? It was quite frankly awful.
The animation was really bad, it didn't flow at all and it just looked blocky. You even had one bit repeated just as filler :/
Lastly, I have a big problem with people ripping off styles. On the flash forum, and cartoons I could quite easily find about 10-20 people who have stolen this "eddsworld" style. Please, please, you may be alright at drawing in that style but if you do something original then people with respect you a lot more.
Overall try getting some unique style, don't copy eddsworld (and you know you have, don't deny it >_>) I don't mind about the length, it was meant to be short but just try harder on the animation, make it smooth.
I love writing reviews like this but it had to be said...
So I have an opinion on BornToByte's shocking flash and you do this eh?
:) opinions are fun.
Good job
The drawings needed to be worked on a bit, but I understood it. Also, Nene is pronounced like "Nay-nay" not "Neen" Good job otherwise though :]
Ah, okaw. Good to know
Ummm
No... How about you take a vacation from animating, or better, life..... forever!
asshole:D
Nice
I can see this becoming a pretty well known series, as a matter of fact, possibly even having it's own collection :)
haha! ye I'd love that :) anyway, glad ya liked it :)
Naruto Ripoff anyone?
I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to give you a bad score. The voices kinda hurts my ears, it hardly kept my attention, and it was a complete naruto rip off. Try to put some more originality in next time
To make this review friendly (cause no one likes a pessimest), I'm going to say:
Other than that, good job
I see no relation to Naruto in this other than there are ninjas.
So I feel it shows your ignorance if you call it a rip-off because of this.
In that case going by your mentality I would presume that the film "300" is a Rip-off of the film "Gladiator" as they both feature warriors.
Or better still, "Naruto" is a Rip-off of "Ninja Scroll" as both are themed on ninja.
I have no issues with opinions & reviews, however when people waste my time with their pathetic reviews on their mediocre points of view, I grow frustrated.
HOWEVER...
While your review somewhat baffles me to a degree, I would presme you were not trying to offend and was merely stating an opinion & your thoughts.
In which case I shall say:
No I do not feel I ripped of Naruto. While I am intrigued by the concept of ninjas & watch several manga animes(including Naruto) I did not take anything from Naruto.
However a persons inspirations & interests may show within there work so I will not doubt that maybe there was something there that could have reminded you of Naruto (although I doubt any other Newgrounder would agree with you_lol).
As for the audio, yes I agree it is poor & if you read the response I gave to "Ninja-Kow"(the first to review this) you may understand why the work was to this quality.
In truth I am thankful for your reveiw & do not take any of my response as a personal attack.
:)
Your own style.......
If by your "own style" you mean ripping off other people's (*COUGH*KRINKELS*COUGH*) artwork, then yes, you have "your own" style.
I bet you don't even make the movie clips of the guys walking. Think about it, you're not drawing shit, just moving movie clips around, that's what madness is. It's not really animation, and yes, I know Krinkels may do the same exact thing, but he is excused from that rule because it's his OWN ORIGINAL DRAWINGS, ANIMATION, IDEA, AND STYLE. Make your own GOOD style and idea and maybe I'll start respecting you as an animator.
true dat homeslice
Undeserved Review
To Crusher117: Wtf? So? Metal Gear Awesome is Metal Gear Solid in "Parody form". The point is it was interesting and well done.
Thx for your comments, but I guess he kinda got a point
oh my god
did you come up with those lyrics? If you did, job well done, man (the animation was great, too. and funny :3). I'm expecting to see this on frontpage :D
I didn't come up with the lyrics. I did the animation to the song. Also I would like that, but lets not get hopes up. Thanks for the 10s though! ^^
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