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I think you should go find some funny webcomics and animations and study what makes them funny. This... just wasn't funny, not entertaining. I don't even care about the fact that the animation isn't that great either, although that's one of the reasons I stopped watching halfway through.
Author's Response:
well u can't please everyone.. but u should watch the entire thing before leaving a review and rating it 0.. the final talent show scene was the funniest part.. thanks anyway tho for atleast taking the time to watch it :)
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Your FBF skills are very impressive. It flowed well and it was very smooth. The only critique I can give is that when you do close-ups, you might want to tone down the line thickness. Other than that, amazing job, amazing story, amazing everything.
P.S. Sorry for the 9/10, I can't biased ;)
P.S.S. I did give you a 5/5 though.
Author's Response:
With the closeups i got kinda lazy and rather than FBFing some of them (like i should've) i decided to tween in for it instead. After all, getting that kinda sequence right is a pain, and after 2 or 3 tries i accepted that i wasn't ready to do that yet, so i opted for a close-up the old fashioned way. Either way, i like how it turned out, and when i'm just looking at it without trying to pick things out it almost doesn't look like i made it, which to me it means that it turned out good. ^^
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But the first one (not sure if there were more) was unsolvable, so I'm going to have to give you a failing grade.
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It's very ambient, and very calming, I love it. Also, BoxingTheStars, his hair isn't lighting up. Look closer. It's his headphones.
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You guys used my level! I made Killer Mountain :D. This was very fun, I love challenges, no critique, this is perfect.
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Unfortunately, that makes it too overdone. Try something more than just random fighting.
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Who is right? What makes what overdone? This was basically random fighting for the users' entertainment. I didn't think people would like a story as much as mindless fighting...
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I love your style, the blood spurts were amazing, as were the weapon trails, but next time, could you try to do actual people and not stick figures?
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But cut scenes aren't the same thing as deleted scenes... Cut scenes are usually just in video games, meaning the scenes with no interaction, but continues the plot. Deleted scenes is the term that applies to these.
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This was the most action packed movie of the summer, all the explosions and car chases, you kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Arnold Schwarzineger's performance was absolutely stunning, and Harold with Maria?! That was an incredible twist. This is the absolute blockbuster of the year... no... of the century....
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